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I've been struggling lately,
With the beast in my head,
I keep losing the battles,
And my troops end up dead,

I guess there's little motivation,
No reason to keep going on,
Cause the world is against me,
And you're always getting gone.

Perhaps you're right though.
Maybe I just cannot see.
That I exist so that I may hurt,
With every little lie you tell me.

I really wont know the answer,
Until I reach the end you know,
Because I keep buying into those,
Little facade's of love you show.
:iconsubtlexantidote:

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:iconaiemcross:
the last two lines seem a bit off. but I love the first section. "I keep losing the battles,
And my troops end up dead," that will probably stay with me for a while. :) nicely done.

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.: I live off violins in hospital rooms:.
To each their own in this crazy world, we all fall down eventually.
:iconsubtlexantidote:
Thanks much =) I'll try to amend them!

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